This past year, thanks to my participation in Friday Flash, I've penned a great number of flash fiction (stories less than 1000 words). For this reason, I think some might like to see my process when it comes to flash. As with all my articles, my goal isn't to tell you exactly what you need to do (every writer is different), but rather to show you how I create my stories. If this helps you, great; if not, at least you'll get a glimpse into my writing life. And what writer doesn't like a view of how others work?
Most of my flash fiction comes from writing prompts. I usually start by jotting down the prompt at the top of the page. Unless I'm caught by a wave of inspiration, I'll leave it and work on something else, letting the prompt mix with other ideas simmering in my subconscious. When I come back to the page a day or two later, I simply sit down and start writing. It often takes a few minutes for anything usable to flow, but once it does, watch out! The words fly onto the page fast and furiously.
If, on the other hand, I find the words barely trickling out, or worse, not at all, I'll start freewriting. It's a simple process--take a blank sheet of paper and bang out ideas about the story. I don't judge ideas at this point; I put them all down so they are visible. Later I can deem which are worthy to be expanded on. I'll also play "What if?" This works the same as freewriting. I'll ask myself questions about things in the story, usually starting with "what if..." and throw out multiple answers. When I get a few down, I'll decide which one I like best for that particular story. Sometimes that's enough to break the log jam in my brain, and other times I'll move onto a new question. Sooner or later, the story is ready to write.
Once I've finished the first draft, unless the story needs to go out soon, I'll let it sit for a day or two (or a week or two if I'm in no rush) before I revise. I rarely find my flash fiction stories need a major overhaul (I'd rather scrap the story and start another with the same idea instead of moving the pieces around), so I almost always just give them a few line-edit passes (however many I feel it takes before the story is ready). I write most of my flash fiction with pen and paper, but I usually edit them right on the computer (with the typing considered my first revision). Once I deem them ready, I'll send them off to an e-zine or magazine, or publish them on my blog for Friday Flash.
Next Wednesday, I'll talk about the nuts and bolts of how I participate in Friday Flash. I occasionally wonder what other participants do, so I figure other writers must have the same questions. Until next time, keep writing and/or reading.
I write my flash by hand too. I find that when you have so few words to work with, I'm more careful with what I handwrite, than what I type, and my typed version is my edit. My uber-proofer boyfriend will then check for typos or missed words and that's that. The ideas....well, they're everwhere. :)
ReplyDeleteI start an idea as a draft post on the blog where I post them when they're done. Rarely do I start one and use it the same week; usually they percolate for a while, and then one will jump to my forebrain and come out. Sometimes they wind up being bigger than a flash, and those I cut and paste into a word doc and it goes off to be a 'big-boy' story :)
ReplyDeleteI like doing flashfics because I have had a tendency recently to explode all over the place and write long stories. Writing the little ones makes me more disciplined as a writer and I hope it translates as such into my other writing.
My process is uncannily similar to your own. I dp try to leave my flash pieces to the middle of the week less my internal editor demands I return and buff and polish them beyond belief.
ReplyDeletethank you for sharing. I think those can be good tips.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments!
ReplyDeleteIt's always fascinating to find out how other writers approach a piece of writing. I've never had a go at freewriting, but I think I might!
ReplyDeleteI write everything, from flash to novel, on paper first. The transfer to the computer becomes the first edit that way.
ReplyDeleteFreewriting gets me out of a ton of jams. If my brain refuses to work with me on a story, freewriting jump starts it.
ReplyDeleteAnd, Laura, I wrote my first novel on paper and used the typing as a first edit, but I typed my second right onto my laptop. I think I'll go back to writing it for my third because I missed that step of typing as editing. Writing also seems more fun to me putting it on paper first.
Great post, Eric. I love reading about the process of other scribes.
ReplyDeleteI've never tried free-writing, but I think I might next time I'm completely stuck. Apart from that, it seems my process is similar to yours, and others, in that I hand write everything first and edit as I type it up. Thanks for a great post, Eric, it's always nice to find out I'm not as crazy as I sometimes think I am!
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool idea, talking about FF and the process. I LOVE reading about a writer's process because we are all so different. Thanks for the insight into your process.
ReplyDeleteI've only done a few flashes so far. In my defense, I did just bang out a couple of novels that had been stewing for too long so I think most of my brains are mush now. lol
Most of the time, for me, I'll have something stupid get stuck in my head and fool around with that. My last two flashes were the result of some wise crack complaint about writer's block that I read on Twitter. I just took it the next step and twisted it.