A Haunted Life
by Eric J. Krause
I knew the house was haunted the minute I entered. I could feel the presence of . . . something not normal. I said nothing to my husband, who looked like a kid in a candy store. This was his dream home, and I wasn't going to ruin it with my silly superstitions. I happily agreed when he told the real estate agent that we'd take it.
During our first few years, I often sensed the ghosts, but they left me and mine alone. When the big bang up happened there'd been no warning signs. One minute I was in doing the dishes after a quiet dinner with my husband, Rick, and the next I was surrounded by screaming ghosts.
Most of the words were blurred, as if they existed in white noise, but I did pull a few out. ". . . not fair . . ." "You can't . . ." "I never . . ." ". . . don't understand . . ." Great, our house was haunted by a family with teenagers. Rick and I had talked about kids, but neither of us was ready. I certainly didn't want to be soured on the idea by a family of ghosts, even if I was just an observer.
Things progressed from there. Things moved on their own, lights flickered on and off, and disembodied voices lulled me to sleep on an almost nightly basis. I wished I could have discussed it with Rick, but we didn't talk anymore. I don't know why. There'd been no knock-down, drag-out fight or anything like that; we just stopped communicating. I'd occasionally see him crying, but he wouldn't look at me, so I couldn't bring myself to comfort him.
Life went on. Most of my waking moments went towards trying to observe the family of ghosts. I was getting pretty good at listening to their conversations and watching them go about their ghostly lives. They thought they were still alive because they were as mundane as most people I knew.
At some point, I made two huge discoveries, both involving my husband. The first part was that, even though we were still married, I'd lost track of him. The second was the ghost husband. At first I thought it was my father-in-law, but the more I concentrated, the more I eavesdropped, I realized it was Rick himself. He'd aged twenty years since the last time I saw him. Which was when? Last week? No. Last month? No. I couldn't remember. Whatever was happening, I needed to figure it out once and for all.
As the ghost family, including my husband, sat down to their nightly meal, I jumped up on the table. They'd have to see me now, and they did. I expected them to try to scare me away, or at the very least disappear into thin air. Instead, they all leapt up from their chairs, yelled "Ghost!" and ran from the room. Just as I thought; they didn't know they were dead.
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After that moment, the house changed. I still found some of Rick's favorite things, though, like him, they looked like they'd aged two decades. My stuff was all gone. New furniture, clothes, household accessories, knick-knacks, and all kinds of other crap I'd never before seen filled the house. I wanted to walk around and finger it all, but something drew me to the corner of the garage, Rick's workshop area, like a beacon.
A plaque hung on the wall, and I knew right away I didn't want to look at it. But I couldn't help myself. Our wedding picture, along with a few snaps of just me framed a bronze engraving. It read: "Mary Walter-Jackson. RIP. My lovely wife. I'll never forget you. 1968-1991."
Tears stung my eyes. No. That couldn't be true. A calendar hung nearby, and I saw January 2011. No, no, no. This couldn't be true.
A light exploded out in the in middle of the garage, right where my old Mazda hatchback used to sit. I stared at the light for a few seconds, letting my tears dry away. It wasn't just a bright ball of white light, but a long tunnel. And it was beautiful. Without looking back, I started towards it.
"disembodied voices lulled me to sleep on an almost nightly basis"
ReplyDeleteThese are the perks realtors never count on when they hide that the property has ghosts. Why, I'd pay double for some white noise spectres!
This reminded me of that movie I loved, "The Others". Nice tale, Eric!
ReplyDeleteI wrote a flash last week about ghosts not realising they're dead too. Must be something in the ether!
ReplyDeleteGosh, it must be awful to wake up to the fact you're actually dead.
you can feel her stomach drop as the moment of realisation happens.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of The Others too, Eric. Very well told - how she goes about her daily life for so many years without realizing she's dead. That's not easy to write, but you do it fluently.
ReplyDeleteExcellent ghost story, Eric. Deanna's right, you led us to her realization seamlessly.
ReplyDeleteYou know, I don't think those disembodied voices would lull me to sleep AT ALL. Eek! :)
There's something so sad about a lost and bewildered ghost. Great story.
ReplyDeleteNice job flipping the haunted house story. I read again and picked up the subtle clues along the way. Great work!
ReplyDeleteIt's nice that she was able to move on when she finally realized she was the one that was dead. Excellent job with the subtle clues.
ReplyDeleteNice one, Maybe I read too much of this stuff. I think you could have held it back just a little longer, but still, it was a great story.
ReplyDeleteNicely done. I could see you expanding this and have us mistake her ghost obsession with mental illness, if you have the inclination.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the read Eric, as has already been said, it also gave me images of "The Others"
ReplyDeleteAnd one or two shivery moments too.
Yes, it reminded me of The Others but it's more contemporary. With a happy ending, too. Cool, Eric!
ReplyDeleteI love how this slips between the two worlds seamlessly.
ReplyDeleteAdam B @revhappiness
I love how you don't suspect anything at first and then the true situation creeps up on you. Nice one!
ReplyDeleteHaunting story - I picked up on what was happening about the time she said they no longer talked.
ReplyDeleteI just had to go and poke my husband after reading this . . . just to make sure.
ReplyDeleteGood story I like it.
It takes one to know one, is that it? A good ghost story, with a happy ending: realizing the truth so she can now completely pass on.
ReplyDeleteBittersweet. She finds her way at the end; but this whole time she was worrying about how he no longer talked to her; but it was him finally moving on. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteIt make think of The Others, without the stay in Limbo forever part. Nice.
ReplyDeleteGosh, I can't spell! I meant it "made me think"
ReplyDeleteThis is charming. I love the line about the disembodied voices singing her to sleep. I can't help but wonder how she died, especially with her mention of the argument. Am I chasing at shadows? If I am, they're probably more spirits. Really enjoyed this ghost story.
ReplyDeleteTake care,
Jess
This was a fun read. I seem to have tumbled to the coming realization of her own passing pretty early on, but I don't think that's the fault of story, but how I'm tuned today.
ReplyDeleteThanks for writing and posting this, and thanks @JessRosenbooks for tweeting about it. good on ya both. Will be following you Eric, now that I know you're here.
Nicely wrought tale of realization. Imagine that moment...
ReplyDeleteAs an aside, I live in a lightly haunted house. Mostly just footsteps, but there was that one time in the bedroom when my wife and I simultaneously said, "did you see that?"
I love a good ghost story and this had a nice twist at the end. I agree with the others about "The Others" - great movie. Nice job this week, Eric.
ReplyDeleteEric -- this was my fave line of your 'ghostwriting': "disembodied voices lulled me to sleep on an almost nightly basis." ... Quite a caveat emptor in a there-goes-the-neighborhood tale. But geeeeez - her plaque was all the way out in the corner of the garage over Rick's workshop? At least the love's still hanging around.
ReplyDeleteGood twistaround and tablehopping. Smiled too at your evoking Lindsey to poke her husband for life, and that Donald has a 'lightly haunted house' <-- does that mean the spirits come with illumination? ~ Absolutely*Kate
It always freaks me out that there might be ghosts all around me, esp ghosts of people I knew. Can they see everything i do? Yikes.
ReplyDeleteGreat story which is melancholic and uplifting at the same time.
Thanks for the great comments on this one, everyone! I had a blast writing it. As I wrote the first line, I was under the impression that the house was haunted, but not by her. As I continued on, I realized she was the ghost. I think it was when she first heard the family arguing and thought there were teenage ghosts in there. I finished up with the new direction and then went back and made sure the story flowed. I'm glad most of you agreed that it did!
ReplyDeleteIt's funny that so many people brought up the connection with the movie The Others. I had an earlier story compared to that, too (can't remember which one off the top of my head). I've never seen that movie, and though the title is familiar to me (Nicole Kidman, right?), I know nothing about it. I've added it to my Netflix queue, so sometime in the near future I'll see what storyline I ran so close with. I'm looking forward to it; sounds like a good movie from how everyone is describing it.
Love how this weaves through memory and reality. The distance the ghostly presence all add up to a shocker ending.
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